Done and to do

There -- a revised, printed draft of the YA novel code-named Second Thoughts. Now there's a handful of notes and polishing and cutting everything that isn't part of the story as finally concluded, all of which best handled on paper. If the trimmings aren't at least 5000 words, I'll look for more, for I've run a wee long -- 65k. But, it's a draft.

So in celebration, a game of ( twenty lines. )

---L.