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There -- a revised, printed draft of the YA novel code-named Second Thoughts. Now there's a handful of notes and polishing and cutting everything that isn't part of the story as finally concluded, all of which best handled on paper. If the trimmings aren't at least 5000 words, I'll look for more, for I've run a wee long -- 65k. But, it's a draft.

So in celebration, a game of twenty lines. However, instead of movies or novels, as others, I'll do lines of poetry. To even the field, all were found on my top nightstand shelf -- IOW, common anthology pieces. Well, anthology pieces, anyway. Your task is identify the poem (ETA: Google is, of course, cheating); I'll post the answers with credits in another post.

ETA bold to unidentified lines:

"And all the best of dark and bright"

"Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet bird sang"

"Beauty, vision, midnight dies"

"Because many of them are thirteen stories high"

"Charmed magic casements, opening on the foam"

"For he can spraggle upon waggle at the word of command"

"Housbondes at chirche dore I have had five"

"I have been faithful to thee, Cynara! in my fashion"

"I have seen them gentle, tame, and meke"

"Maiden, and mistress of the months and stars"

"Now -- for a breath I tarry"

"That twenty centuries of stony sleep"

"The City is of Night, but not of Sleep"

"Things invisible to see"

"This is the parting that they had"

"When the stars threw down their spears"

"Where ignorant armies clash by night"

"World brood with warm breast and with ah! bright wings"

"Wrapped up in a five-pound note"

"You were silly like us; your gift survived it all"

---L.

Date: 17 January 2005 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junoxxiv.livejournal.com
congrats!
back to grading...

Date: 17 January 2005 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jorrie-spencer.livejournal.com
Congratulations on the draft!

She Walks In Beauty

Date: 17 January 2005 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madwriter.livejournal.com
>>"And all the best of dark and bright"<<

My Byron's a little rusty, but I always liked this one...

Met in her aspect and her eyes
Thus mellowed to that tender light
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.


Date: 17 January 2005 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelly-rae.livejournal.com
Quickly, as dinner is on the stove.

"Housbondes at chirche dore I have had five" Wife of Bath's Prologue, Canterbury Tales, Geoffrey Chaucer

"Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet bird sang" Sonnet 73, William Shakespeare

Anon.

Date: 17 January 2005 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelly-rae.livejournal.com
Sonnet 73 is one of my favorites too. And the Chaucer, well, here I'm a ringer, as one section of my Ph.D. exams was on Middle English literature.

I think this one is W. Auden's Vision (I could have the title wrong). "Beauty, vision, midnight dies"

I do not know why I know that this is Sir Thomas Wyatt, They flee from me that sometimes did me seke. I have seen them gentle, tame, and meke"

Oh and I knew The Owl and the Pussycat too but Janni beat me to it!
Anon.

Date: 17 January 2005 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
Yaaay on draft!

"That twenty centuries of stony sleep"
"... were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle." Yeat's "The Second Coming"

"Things invisible to see"
I don't suppose you'd accept "the Donne that also talks about mandrake roots"?

"When the stars threw down their spears"
"Tiger, Tiger," Blake

"Where ignorant armies clash by night"
"Dover Beach," Matthew Arnold

"Wrapped up in a five-pound note"
"The Owl and the Pussycat," Edward Lear

"You were silly like us; your gift survived it all"
"On the Death of W.B. Yeats," Auden ("Mad Ireland hurt you into poetry ...")

Date: 17 January 2005 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
I knew that. Thought I'd even said it (but that "In Memoriam" was correct.) Where on earth did I get "On the Death of"?

Date: 17 January 2005 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] klwilliams.livejournal.com
Darn. You all beat me to the ones I knew.

Congrats on finishing, though.

Date: 17 January 2005 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
"I have been faithful to thee, Cynara! in my fashion"

Non sum qualis eram bonae sub regno Cynarae by Ernest Dowson.

Date: 17 January 2005 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
Lucy Anne can verify that I knew it off the top of my head because I was on the phone to her at the time.

Date: 17 January 2005 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randimason.livejournal.com
He did. He went to the Norton to double check that he didn't muck up the Latin, but he banged out the three answers inside of about twenty minutes.

And that's without the luxury of a shared night table. :)

Date: 19 January 2005 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
"That was in another country, and besides the wench is dead."

Date: 20 January 2005 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
Only in my imagination.

Date: 17 January 2005 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
"For he can spraggle upon waggle at the word of command" from Christopher Smart's Jubilate Agno.

Date: 19 January 2005 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
I didn't recognise the line immedidiately, but it sounded like something a cat named Jeoffry would do.

Date: 17 January 2005 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enrobso.livejournal.com
"Things invisible to see."

A Song by John Donne.

Date: 17 January 2005 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randimason.livejournal.com
And if memory serves, he didn't go to the Norton to verify that one...he went to "Stardust".

But it was Janni's hint about the Mandrake root that nailed it.

Date: 17 January 2005 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelmanija.livejournal.com
Congratulations!

Date: 17 January 2005 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ogre-san.livejournal.com
Congrats on the complete draft. I know that's a good feeling.

Date: 17 January 2005 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
"The City is of Night, but not of Sleep"

This is "The City of Endless Night," I think, but I'm still blanking on the author.

WAG: Browning?

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