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[livejournal.com profile] kateelliott on why "show don't tell" works:
Humans like to figure out other humans. We evolved to observe, interact, gossip, and create relationships. Creating a relationship between the characters is not all a novelist does. We as writers are also creating a relationship between the character and the reader.
Don't give us the adjectives of your conception of the character, give us the character in (inter)action.

And while I'm linking, I might as well plop in my current collection. A lot of long reading in this batch, for some reason: Even if, as I suspect, all of you are secretly ninja and so already know that. That I have no proof that any of you are ninja only goes to show how good you are at it.

---L.

Date: 26 July 2010 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] movingfinger.livejournal.com
Switzerland is kind of doing that anyway. The rail and transit system is superb, as you know, and at the moment the Swiss are engaged in tunneling into France and Italy to improve it, and the French and Italians are quite happy to have the Swiss come in and manage transit systems around the border areas.

Date: 26 July 2010 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] galeni.livejournal.com
Bows of apology: thank you!

Date: 26 July 2010 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coraa.livejournal.com
I honestly can't say whether "broke the Ninja Code by falling in love" or "caught red-handed in an orgy of evil" was my favorite of the bows!
Edited Date: 26 July 2010 08:43 pm (UTC)

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