Progress report

[larryhammer]

And with printing out a clean version for copying, I declare it a first draft. "It" being Wolf and Wing, the fluffy YA paranormal romance. I'd call it furry, given the werewolf, but that'd be taken the wrong way. Besides, the fairy's personality is fluffy enough for both of 'em.

Time to send out for comments. Because, truly, I can no longer see the dratted thing clearly. Tomorrow, figure out what to work on next to rest my brain.

Maybe I'll take a poll (and then ignore it).

---L.

Comments

[jennifer-j-s.livejournal.com]

I want to read your ms. Do you want me to use red, purple, green, or blue pen to mark it up?

Or, I could do black, but that probably wouldn't provide enough contrast.

It sounds really fun!

[larryhammer]

Whichever color you prefer.

I need to make compies, so it'll be a couple days.

---L.

[janni.livejournal.com]

Yaaaaaay completed draft!

[larryhammer]

Wheeeeeeeee!

What brains? We don't need no steenkin brains.

---L.

[sartorias.livejournal.com]

*clapping hands*

*stomping bleachers*

[larryhammer]

*watches cheerleaders*

*remembers one of them is L-positive*

*watches them anyway*

---L.

[gillpolack.livejournal.com]

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (complete first draft is a good state. The state of your mind, though, suggests that alcohol would be of assistance as well as readers.)

[larryhammer]

Alcohol might of worked. I used weird anime instead.

---L.

[kateelliott.livejournal.com]

Congrats!

I like the title.

[larryhammer]

Oh good. I'm still tentative about it, but early reactions have been positive.

---L.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_twilight_/]

You settled on a title? Congrats on the finished first draft! :D

[larryhammer]

Well, working title.

---L.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_twilight_/]

Ah, gotcha. You know, sometimes working titles become actual titles when they seem less awful than other possibilities. ;)

[larryhammer]

Exactly. He said in an Eyeore voice.

---L.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_twilight_/]

You know, if it gets popular and people make reverse-alphabetical listings of favorites, it'll be at or near the top of the list.

[beth-bernobich.livejournal.com]

Yay for first draft!

*rubs hands in anticipation*

[larryhammer]

Maybe in a couple months?

---L.

[beth-bernobich.livejournal.com]

Works for me.

[jorrie-spencer.livejournal.com]

First draft! Woohoo! (Does this have Jase in it?)

[larryhammer]

Yup, this is Jase and Fi's story.

Man, but she's such the flake. Hee!

---L.

[oracne.livejournal.com]

Congratulations!

[larryhammer]

Yay!!!

And thanks again for the first line.

---L.

[sfmarty.livejournal.com]

You sending it out? May I be on your list? I love getting that kind of email.

[larryhammer]

I have I think enough people looking at this first draft, but would you be willing to read the second?

---L.