Innit? I need to play around some more, but I'm pretty sure that ending wouldn't land as hard with only two stanzas, instead of three to build it up.
ETA: Yeah, it's a three-part argument, and without one of the legs, the tripod is wobbly.
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Date: 16 June 2025 07:35 pm (UTC)Innit? I need to play around some more, but I'm pretty sure that ending wouldn't land as hard with only two stanzas, instead of three to build it up.
ETA: Yeah, it's a three-part argument, and without one of the legs, the tripod is wobbly.