I'm unsure how much the distinction is the speaker's and how much the poet's.
I didn't take it as a distinction: it looked like a rhetorical device I don't know the name for, but it's a kind of parallelism with elements of metonymy. How are you reading the last line?
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Date: 2 July 2018 05:55 pm (UTC)I didn't take it as a distinction: it looked like a rhetorical device I don't know the name for, but it's a kind of parallelism with elements of metonymy. How are you reading the last line?