I have no ear for poetry, but wow, that first verse seemed terrible! I kept reading aghast, waiting for a gem (or a point) and then skimmed until I hit your last graph, and went whew. Bad as I am, at least I managed to catch the sour clang on this one.
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Date: 19 February 2018 01:29 pm (UTC)