Tracing changing visions
9 November 2007 07:29 amFirst draft of 5 Nov 07:
These geese, flying south;As posted 6 Nov 07:
from these mountains and valleys,
I fold my own birds.
Geese are flying south.Draft of 7 Nov 07:
From mountain and valley folds
birds come to my hand.
Honkers flying south;Draft of 8 Nov 07:
from the mountains and valleys
a bird folds to hand.
---L.The honkers fly #$@^%#U*
argh ...