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Line-breaks ahoy!
30 October 2005 08:45 amBecause I'm feeling in need of self-indulgence, the opening of "Seven Myrmidons Against Thebes," the fourth story in the cycle:
( figleaf to hide the (gasp) line-breaks )
Rough first draft, but there's some good stuff in there. Makes me want to get back and write the rest. Incompletely civilized ant-women rip up the Oepidus cycle -- what's not to love? Well, aside from the clunking of dialog against verse. I rilly need to learn how to handle that better. By doing it.
---L.
( figleaf to hide the (gasp) line-breaks )
Rough first draft, but there's some good stuff in there. Makes me want to get back and write the rest. Incompletely civilized ant-women rip up the Oepidus cycle -- what's not to love? Well, aside from the clunking of dialog against verse. I rilly need to learn how to handle that better. By doing it.
---L.