Line-breaks ahoy!

Because I'm feeling in need of self-indulgence, the opening of "Seven Myrmidons Against Thebes," the fourth story in the cycle:

( figleaf to hide the (gasp) line-breaks )

Rough first draft, but there's some good stuff in there. Makes me want to get back and write the rest. Incompletely civilized ant-women rip up the Oepidus cycle -- what's not to love? Well, aside from the clunking of dialog against verse. I rilly need to learn how to handle that better. By doing it.

---L.