Larry Hammer (
larryhammer) wrote2007-11-09 07:29 am
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Tracing changing visions
First draft of 5 Nov 07:
These geese, flying south;As posted 6 Nov 07:
from these mountains and valleys,
I fold my own birds.
Geese are flying south.Draft of 7 Nov 07:
From mountain and valley folds
birds come to my hand.
Honkers flying south;Draft of 8 Nov 07:
from the mountains and valleys
a bird folds to hand.
---L.The honkers fly #$@^%#U*
argh ...
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Sneezing?
maybe I'm allergic to geese?
Re: maybe I'm allergic to geese?
Re: maybe I'm allergic to geese?
Re: maybe I'm allergic to geese?
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I like the insight into the process. :)
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and the draft of 8 Nov--those are oracle-bone ideographs you're using at the end, yeah? :-P
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(Anonymous) 2007-11-09 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/stevens-13ways.html
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