larryhammer: floral print origami penguin, facing left (Default)
Larry Hammer ([personal profile] larryhammer) wrote 2022-08-18 05:50 pm (UTC)

"Tenting-ground" is my first bonk -- why not "campground"? or continue the martial metaphor and keep the meter with "garrison" or "bivouac"?

Those last four lines are total Bonk City, of course.

Post a comment in response:

(will be screened)
(will be screened if not validated)
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org