larryhammer: floral print origami penguin, facing left (Default)
Larry Hammer ([personal profile] larryhammer) wrote 2007-11-09 03:32 pm (UTC)

My work here is done?

The second/third line of Nov 7 is closest to what I was trying to capture when I started. My sense of prosody is Western enough to really want a line break after "valleys," for the syntactical ambiguity.

---L.
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